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Vote I

Positives

Funny
Simple campaign message, straight to the point
Informative
Hits target audience
Direct address - spoke to viewer
Location - suits TA
Music / sound effects

Could be better

Production quality
Acting - more takes
Sound - dubbed the audio - GET SOMEONE ELSE!
More shots to choose from
Advertising technique

ACTIONS

- More people in the group
- Organise time better so as to have more time for shooting, more shots
- Consider how to persuade people 

Vote II

Positives

Emotional - speech - music
Nice variety of people reinforcing
Clear message
Voice acting
Idea

Could be better

EXAMPLES - rather then just tell someone to do something
Show reasons why someone should do the thing you want them to do

Equality in the workplace

Acting 
Funny!
Shots
Idea! 
Props/mise en scene

Under a minute!

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